Chapter 1
Magical. Pulls you, troubles you, makes you sad and sympathetic and angry. And of course you want to read more :)
🙏🙏🙏❤️
Hooked.
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This is a nice start: it’s got me wanting more. I’m a little skeptical about serialization, but I’m going to try to stick with you. Is this an already-finished piece that you’re now parceling out, or are you writing as you go?
Thanks! Already finished. Worked on it a good while. Had beta readers, did revising/editing etc.
Interesting intro. Showing once again how little I know about addiction.
Thanks! Been enjoying your SS as well :)
An excellent read. I liked it. Easy to read, and oh so easy to understand.
Thanks Ben!
Magical. Pulls you, troubles you, makes you sad and sympathetic and angry. And of course you want to read more :)
🙏🙏🙏❤️
Hooked.
❤️❤️❤️❤️
This is a nice start: it’s got me wanting more. I’m a little skeptical about serialization, but I’m going to try to stick with you. Is this an already-finished piece that you’re now parceling out, or are you writing as you go?
Thanks! Already finished. Worked on it a good while. Had beta readers, did revising/editing etc.
Interesting intro. Showing once again how little I know about addiction.
Thanks! Been enjoying your SS as well :)
An excellent read. I liked it. Easy to read, and oh so easy to understand.
Thanks Ben!