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Joshua Shapiro's avatar

Magical. Pulls you, troubles you, makes you sad and sympathetic and angry. And of course you want to read more :)

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Michael Mohr's avatar

🙏🙏🙏❤️

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Jeannie Lynn Wagner's avatar

Hooked.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Tom Pendergast's avatar

This is a nice start: it’s got me wanting more. I’m a little skeptical about serialization, but I’m going to try to stick with you. Is this an already-finished piece that you’re now parceling out, or are you writing as you go?

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Thanks! Already finished. Worked on it a good while. Had beta readers, did revising/editing etc.

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J. M. Elliott's avatar

Interesting intro. Showing once again how little I know about addiction.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Thanks! Been enjoying your SS as well :)

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ben woestenburg's avatar

An excellent read. I liked it. Easy to read, and oh so easy to understand.

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Michael Mohr's avatar

Thanks Ben!

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