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Dr. Deborah Hall's avatar

You can do way-y-y-y-y better

than either of these.

The first repels, the second bores.

Go back to the drawing board

till MOST of your readers say YES!!!!!!!

to one of the two choices you offer.

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Yehawes (VA)'s avatar

Not the punks. They're just too baby faced. Ever notice how female models in ads are younger than the target audience, males are tougher, fantasy self images rule?

Not sure I love the books and beer, either though. The idea below might be okay: Punk, Lazyboy, beer, book... but maybe from the back, over the shoulder? Book is yours, beer label can be partly covered by hand (which is large, young male), and feet stretch out in back of the title, big black and beat up.

Just not the young baby faced punks, however...

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